Posts for July 19, 2024
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#24220
Nick Gurr,
I did proof read it. Your grammar and spelling is all good. Unfortunately your opener -- Aussie like Melbourne -- starts you off in a bad spot. Aussies pronounce Melbourne as Mel-bin. So it's a pretty shitty start and even worse when I am not even Aussie. Not a bad little poem, though.
- Posted by CoL Oni